lovely poem! great job!
I welcome you upon my path
but be careful along the way
because I'm tattered and torn,
so many times I've been betrayed.

^ i like that part the best, love is about trust, even if if hurtsin the end.

~PLP~ angel~ hugs & love~

Hey Heather!
This is a great poem! I can relate to what you're saying, the stuff about being tattered and torn. I understand what that feels like. So, great job writing this!

Wow! Very well done Heather, Excellent Write. Good choice of words and nice rhymes.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Amit.

Heather, WOW! Beautiful in every way. I'm speechless. hugs, love, *Ann*

hey, ur heart iz in da rite place n love iz upon ur heart. never give up on love as u should never give up on urself. da part of love iz based on dedication and affection n honesty..... wuteva iz wut happens but fate will hav dat job not u u cant stop betryal or hurt but u hav 2 fite it n NOT let it win:P ive literalli talked TOO much coment baq:O

Good poem, well written. Nicely thought out and a good delivery. One of your better one, stick to happy poems, it is where your strengths are, your better here then anywhere.

Five/Five.

Signed,
Dark Savior

Hello Heather !

I enjoyed the Walk with you !
and i like your heart basis too : )
and i loved the sweet end you had,it was a sweet happy end ! but yet still mysterious, one can never predict for the Future !

i've notived Strength in your words ! i love that style of personality !

Excellent peice of work !

Peace
Rua Francis.

its about to make me cry, i'm such a suk for love poems thumbs up :)

i love it!! very beautiful writing...such a masterpiece. 5/5

love always...xx

Wow, I really loved this poem hun. It's great. ;)

I like how truthful about yourself you are, good poem. Keep up the creative writing.

thanks for the comment on my poem. it meant alot comming from someone so accomplished. this poem of yours was beautiful, touching. i can relate to being betrayed and hoping the next love is true love.

A very beautiful and touching poem. Wonderful job. 5/5

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

wow girl that was grt i loved it .... ;)
always smile
peacee
love yaa