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by Just Lucy   Apr 28, 2005


Is this me?
Tell me why
What would you think
If you saw me here?

Scars up my arms
Stomach and legs
Hoping that no one will see these wounds
Numb on the outside
Killing me inside
What would you think
If you saw me here?

Secluding myself
Don’t want to be seen
Don’t want to be noticed
All I wasn’t is just to be free
What would you think
if you saw me here?

Sitting on the computer
Hoping for an answer
Wishing of no criticism
Hoping for no future
What would you think
If you saw me here?

Thinking of this
If I was a someone
Would I be here
Writing these poems
What would you think
If you saw me here?

I would think I was a loser
A loner and a joke
But when I see it’s me
On the inside
I think of someone with no hope
So what would you think
If you saw me here?

Hiding at school
Don’t want to be seen
Hate this life
What does this mean?
This is who I am
So please don’t criticize
If you are the one
That see’s me here

© Lucy Green

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  • 19 years ago

    by elizabeth

    Numb on the outside
    Killing me inside

    That's my favorite, it's so good. Sometimes, I too think of what others would think about me if they knew half the stuff I do. You really expressed this wondering well...keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by MYkisstoBETRAY

    If it were me who you are asking, I would...no DO think you are an amazing writer who deserves happiness more than most!! I wish you wouldn't think so poorly of yourself. And, btw, if you were not sitting at your computer writing poems I would have no one on my favorites list. :D So keep writing please!!!
    *jacki*

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