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  • 19 years ago

    by erotema

    this is actually about adam and eve
    "He" is God, coming into their lives
    the "fourth" is the serpent in the garden of eden

    there is a paradox within the poem as well.
    any other questions?

  • 19 years ago

    by Forever29

    I found a masterpiece! I just wrote an Adam & Eve poem called "Tree of Knowledge" so this poem was especially interesting to me. Keep up the great work 5!

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Impressive Work.

    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

    Nidhi's Love, Amit.

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    really really really good poem,it rocked *mwah*