Will You Listen

by Robert   Apr 28, 2005


Did I do everything right, what did I leave out,
I am so flustered I could just shout.
Did I say the right thing will they finally see the light,
or will it end up again a struggling fight?
I want them to see the world through my eyes,
so that they may not suffer my demise.
My neck is tense my knuckle as white a egg shell,
oh what must I say to end this hell.
They tell me they know what they are doing but its all so wrong,
and all I have to see is this car crash go so long.
That the best way to put it all this mess,
watching mistake after mistake is like seeing a dead body I must confess.
Still I try to hold my tongue for I was once young as they were too,
but can’t they see my words are spoken true?
Ahhhh… I hate this waiting until the bloody end,
some time I just want push my hands and let it mend.
We all must learn our own way for this is the truth of it all,
and hopefully they will learn before I witness their fall.
Maybe a sip of wine and a turn of my head will do,
no I need to watch because I love you.
I hope and pray that you will do what is right in the end,
and hope that my loud advice will give you that rightful bend.
Maybe you will listen to what I say and do what right for you.
oh my God why don’t I feel that’s not true.
A constant stress, an itch that I can’t scratch because it’s beyond my reach,
oh please listen to the lesson that I did teach.

Written By
Robert Lee Niswander
Copyright 2005

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jaymes Haze

    I'm going to have to say that this is supposedly an attempt to show someone's plight in trying to show someone, probably important to them, the way to get through life.

    Tell me if I got it right.
    It was quite the poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    Once again you capture the meaning you wish to display and your paint it for everybody to see. the only thing i have to say is that he diffrent lenghts of the stanzas throws off the flow a little but it was great and i give it a 5.

  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Hmm i never seen a poem that hits upon being a parent quite this way, i also like the way you chose to express yourself with your imagination, great work hope to see more -
    raindrops 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    This is really sweet,shows youre love for them

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Real good vocab in this one again you really choose you words carfully and i like that xxx alex xxx