Man’s determination and fixation on goals
and dreams is what keeps man dreaming
for the big catch and never giving up even
if he dies trying.

I bet the old man is waiting for a mermaid,
and the beer is for that lucky fin lady. lol
excellent read indeed I enjoyed this one,
keep the Great Write Alive.

this was an amazing poem. did you think about it? cuz it was amazing. i love it. im gonna e-mail it to like...erbody!! lol. yeah. love ya!! keep it up, nancy

i like it, it's got a good message 5/5, take care
~Rae

wonderful poem, ingenious message, and beautifully worked. You did an exceptional job writing this, though I am not a fan of rhyming poetry myself. I rated it a 5/5.

awesome job! 5/5!

Absolutely well done, "Nobody", I love metaphorical poetry although I've never been too good at it myself. I was going to analyze it but bogie beat me to it. =) Well penned sweetheart, keep em coming!

and ps... for "Two Worlds Apart"...it actually relates to society giving pity to those who are depressed, have eating disorders, or anything of that sort. But I'd much rather pity the ones who've never had a harsh experience because they'll never make it in the world that awaits them.

Love Always,
Heather

ps keep in touch.

Okay, I love the symbolism..and I love the encouragement this poem offers. I'm in a situation like that right now and everytime I want to just give up something always stops me...I don't think I ever will give up...Excellent job!

Haha, good poem but I gotta say..somedays it's just healthier to quit. There's no such thing as a good addiction. ;) Good poem

I liked the concept, it seems as if some of the stanzas are a bit redundant; such as the fourth. i like the first two lines of the second stanza much