Sweeeet...Very nice indeed, I feel the feelings you've engraved in this one..
And I'm 110% that he will like it...
very very sure...
Oh well..Good luck!
All the best to you...
;-)

Writing for someone has its draw backs you want to make it so perfect, in truth there is no great poem for those you hold dear to your heart. The best is what you can say and with sinserity. You have done this I can not judge this for it really has no meaning to me but the person you wrote it for will see it and thats all you should ever think about. I am sure if they are as close to you as you say they are They will Love it because it is the best you gave to them. I hope this tells you what you want. The best gift is from the heart and you gave that in here so who cares what others say. Look to them to truely understand and enjoy this peice take care and be well...

I would love any poem that someone wrote for me! You're right the best poems come from the heart. I think you expressed your feelings very well~! Take Care! Brooke

I think this is very sweet ande touching....Wish that some one would write a poem like that for me =0) This is very good and well written!!!

Take care, Sabrina

dont worry if it sounds like a letter u are right about it being from the heart it is really good and i hope he knows too