I love it!!! ::shivers:: Everything about it gives me goosebumps. So well written. If I were not at school reading this I would probably cry because it reminds me of myself. But I am holding back. I can't express how wonderful this poem is!! Keep writing. |
by Amit
Very well done, Excellent poem. |
by Lmay
omg, BEAUTIFUL!! well done, this poem is so moving, you're truly talented. (5.5) |
Beautiful poem. So much emotion ... Great job. Take care, shell x |
great poem i dont know how to describe it im crying now i loved it so much...great job |
by Hailey
Awwww Thankyou Guys Sooo Much For Commenting./..Smetimes I May Not Comment On Others Poems But I Always Keep Them In The Bak Of My Mind And Then Thank Them All In My own Way..Through A Poem Like This..The People On This Site Are Such Wonderful people..You May Be A cutter..A Rape Victim..A Broken Heart Or Someone Who Never Belongs.>But Your All The Depths Of My Heart..Thankyou So Much For Everything And Especially Writting...MHWAH MWAH |
i'm speechless. and i do also wanna thank everyone on this site for helping me realize that i aint the only one who's a cutter. and who's been cheated on. this poem really opened my eyes. makes me wanna stop and think about what i'm going through and that everyone else is goin through it too. Y.M |
by destiny
it's AWESOME!!! i mean, i wish i would write truth like that man, but i know i'm not good enough....but anyways, i hope your deep words never leave your mind, because they can do so much to a person-you never know....so, i say GREAT JOB & NEVER CHANGE!!!!! |
by Cassiopée
it's an awesome poem... so deep. it almost made me cry. keep up |
dont ever change. this world needs more people like you |
dont ever change. this world needs more people like you |
by Aidyn
You know, you don't see many poems like this, and it just...opens your eyes to everything that DOES happen. I was amazed at just how many people were suffering like that when I first joined. All I can say is thank you for writing this poem. I'm sure it's a comfort for everyone suffering in front of their computer. |