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by Seductive Apr 28, 2005 category : Love, romance / first love
The past was good but , now it has too end, I didn't only need a boyfriend, but also a friend, The things you didn't do made me become agitated, And from those actions, I could tell our relationship was faded, During our passionate moments, were good showing your actions, But you didn't show enough, when times came emotional , brought many distractions, My mind was cloudy, so my tears would be the rain, When I needed you near, Disappointment appeared because you never came, I felt remorseful and which lead me to become ashamed, All the fault for the heartbreak , and your the one too blame, The dates of time wasn't long enough it expired, I'm tired of trying to work, I retired. Please vote & leave a comment, I want 2 hear others view.
by Amit
Very well done, Excellent poem. 5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Nidhi's Amit.