Very emotional lol |
by Nymphetamine
Very unique. Its poems like these, that actually stir up emotions in the reader, which make me want to improve my writing. Amazing job. |
This is a touching poem that shows that no 2 people see the same event in the same way |
by Erin
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMN!!! i looved it!!!! u rock. tell it how it is!!! 5/5!!! comment any of mine if u'd like. keep writting ur real talented! |
I love that poem!... well okay I love ALL your poems! its so freakin awesome that you have a way with words like that! god bless |
by Tracie
I love your work. Keep writting... |
Wow thats' good relly good!!! :) |
by Jane
Wow that is a good poem, it great how you showed both sides/feeling of the situation |
by Juanita
Nice job of making it 2-way |
I've been in this situation and it was astonishing how well you captured both sides of it. It brought out every emotion. You did a very good job. |
by Jenny
Wow. That was written really well. The flow worked and I just really enjoyed reading it. Is that bad? I don't know, good job though! 5/5 |
by Nanita
OMG!!! this is so good. i love this... you're very talented.... i hope you dont stop writng... much love... |
by Nanita
OMG!!! this is so good. i love this... you're very talented.... i hope you dont stop writng... much love... |
by Rach
Love this poem, you done an excellent job with it! i look forward to reading more of your work! |
by Rach
Love this poem, you done an excellent job with it! i look forward to reading more of your work! |
by DREA
W0OW...THAT WAS GREAT!! I LUV H0W Y0U PUT THE TW0 WAYS 0F THiNKiN 2GETHER iTS VERY CREATiVE!! I L0VE iT EN0UGH iT iS SAD... |
by Wallace
Excellent poem, i really enjoyed it good work 5/5. |
by moon
Very good, i like how it a rap sorta type. |
by Riffy
This was great! I loved the way you managed to get BOTH characters to share their feelings and also create a story and make it rhyme..all at once. |
Omg u are my favorite poet by far....this brings back memorys...it literally made me cry...your really really good. |