This is a really crazy poem... but i enjoyed reading, the different views were so great. |
That was intense and absolutley amazing! well written! |
Hi i just read your poem it was wonderful. you should keep on witing you have a gift:) |
by Marina
THIS IS JUST AMAIZEING!!! sooo wonderful 5/5 i love how you caught both sides of teh story both a story of rape and a story of lustful sex.. extremely well done!!! i'm going to add you to my favorites list this is just mind blowing!!! don't ever stop writeing!! |
by cass
Omg that is such a sad but really good poem it's amazing!!!!!!!! One of my favorites. |
Your works awsome! I'm not really god at this kinda stuff and I'm just starting out! I look forward to more of your work! |
by Baby Rainbow
Omg!!!! thats so amzingly written, thats really clever. great job xxxxxx |
by Ingrid
Hi, |
by Juanita
Best poem on here 2 thumbs up!!! |
by elihja reyes
I loved this poem it was nice especially the ending when it said "i hope u f**king die" |
by Success
LOL WTF but nice |
by Bugg
I loved it! It's definitely going on my fave list. 5/5 |
Hell emotion. i really like this. |
by Lori
That was soo sad. Seriously that made want to cry. But I think it was very well written so great job:) |
by Ciara
That was brilliant....cant belive how good that was well done what a contrast between good and bad brilliant!!!!! |
That was brilliant, it flowed so well. I got it the first time round, which is quick for me lol. Fave list definately! |
Wow! This is a such a sad poem, I nearly cried! |
by Em
Omg, this is so revolting but really, really intriguing. I like the way you write both stories in one. Well done, 5/5. Em |
Wow thats all i can say.... |
by ambmazz
Great poem but very sad. i hop you don't have any experence in the fiend of rape |