Comments : Good Sex/Bad Sex

  • 17 years ago

    by Court Knee Gee

    This is a really crazy poem... but i enjoyed reading, the different views were so great.
    The only word that came to my head after i read this is"wow".
    Its a really powerful poem

  • 17 years ago

    by XxBrokenInsidexX

    That was intense and absolutley amazing! well written!

  • 17 years ago

    by Katelyn McLaughlin

    Hi i just read your poem it was wonderful. you should keep on witing you have a gift:)
    loves
    Katelyn

  • 17 years ago

    by Marina

    THIS IS JUST AMAIZEING!!! sooo wonderful 5/5 i love how you caught both sides of teh story both a story of rape and a story of lustful sex.. extremely well done!!! i'm going to add you to my favorites list this is just mind blowing!!! don't ever stop writeing!!
    ~Marina

  • 17 years ago

    by cass

    Omg that is such a sad but really good poem it's amazing!!!!!!!! One of my favorites.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gods Creation

    Your works awsome! I'm not really god at this kinda stuff and I'm just starting out! I look forward to more of your work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Omg!!!! thats so amzingly written, thats really clever. great job xxxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Hi,

    A very unique poem you have penned here... two sides to a story where there is no happy ending. I know that some men really think that when a girl says "no"she means yes but does not want to appear to be cheap..
    So..when a man is still young he might make this misstake and end up r*p*ng her (how it feels to her).

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Juanita

    Best poem on here 2 thumbs up!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by elihja reyes

    I loved this poem it was nice especially the ending when it said "i hope u f**king die"
    psh idd just go ahead and kill him

  • 16 years ago

    by Success

    LOL WTF but nice

  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    I loved it! It's definitely going on my fave list. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenVodkaBottle

    Hell emotion. i really like this.
    I hope its not true.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lori

    That was soo sad. Seriously that made want to cry. But I think it was very well written so great job:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ciara

    That was brilliant....cant belive how good that was well done what a contrast between good and bad brilliant!!!!!
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by xToBeWithYoux

    That was brilliant, it flowed so well. I got it the first time round, which is quick for me lol. Fave list definately!

    Keep it up :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Rowena Linley

    Wow! This is a such a sad poem, I nearly cried!

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Omg, this is so revolting but really, really intriguing. I like the way you write both stories in one. Well done, 5/5. Em

  • 13 years ago

    by Kimberly Babcock

    Wow thats all i can say....

  • 13 years ago

    by ambmazz

    Great poem but very sad. i hop you don't have any experence in the fiend of rape