Great poem but very sad. i hop you don't have any experence in the fiend of rape

Great poem but very sad. i hop you don't have any experence in the fiend of rape

Great poem but very sad. i hop you don't have any experence in the fiend of rape

Great Poem Matthew! I was date raped at the age of 15 and 5 months later I lost my daughter and I have never gotten over that. 5/5! Check out my work sometime!
~Michelle~

I really liked this. I especially liked how you used a drunk guys POV on the issue and then the girls POV, which makes you feel so sorry for her cause of the guy. Great job! ((5))

~Harlea

Wow really good

Brings back memories better left buried.

It is uncanny how this poem, line for line, describes a horrible experience i went through when i was 15. It was brilliantly written, a format ive never seen. It has affected me deeply & emotionally.

I love the way you worked two ways in here. Absolutely a great job.

This is a dope poem