Oh, it's amazing. So much imagery - it really does make your imagination run wild. GREAT work! :D

Luffuuls,
||Kalah.

That is a beautiful poem, so elegantly written wow, just amazing, very well done

I love it! One of your best, I loved the way it was written, very nice descriptions, great! keep it up!
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Hey I could actually "paint a picture with my mind". Now if I only had a camera...=) So beautiful, every part of this poem it's like OMG...5/5. Thank u for the OTHER comment! Luv Ya S o F r i c k e n M u c H L i l S l a m //ari\\