Great job, I liked the second stanza! 5/5

Love,
Heather

aww thank you heather!! it feels weird not getting any advice from you lol...thanks again....love you lots =) *big hug*

-brittnay-

haha, chicka, sorry... I don't need to give advice as of right now, you're getting better, that old advice def. paid off hehe! keep in touch! love ya too!

Heather.

Nice One, Well Expressed.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.

you know wut brit you are wut u make of urself so live in that freakin obsession i think yu just want attention that the wrong kind and dont get me wrong im ur best friend just you can get over urself u are fake brittnay and people dont like that so wut ever go on with ur cutting and depression but its not doin n e one good so ya read the book we ot from the ninth grade center it will help. i say this only in love!!!!!!!!!!

that was really good..loved it

Unloved ♥

This is one of your better ones, i think your good with your free association writing. it is a given talent that is for sure and you should use it more often.

Five/Five.

Signed,
Dark Savior.

P.S. thank you for your comment and vote on my poem, i am glad that you think it is one of my best. It wasn't just about heather, it was about a lot of girls who i have dated...not just a single one.
One girl isn't enough to bring me down, it will take many more rejections before i am completely shattered inside. Mwahaha, but shhh don't tell anyone.

Shaun!