Really really good Jarrod!! I loved it! Keep it up!! 5/5

Hey Jarrod!

I loved the Title ,its really unique and attractive! and lead me to the end to read about this poem! well i always believe that our Sanctury is our enemy!
coz this place always drags us back to em!!! so its surely an enemy! Right?

OK,nice poem,nice idea,i love
this simple deep style : ) CooL (5/5)

Peace
Rua Francis.

Good poem. It had a nice flow to it. It waas well done. Keep up the good work.
--Sarah--