if you call your poems bad, openly, then when people vote on them they wont be true because they want to make you feel better. so you'll never know if its good or not. as for my opinion i gave you a 5/5 not to make you feel better about it but because its really good. keep up the good work.
~Freak~

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Love the rhythm of it...Keep it up!

Love,
Heather.

Didn't catch the meaning in "Hot Cross Bun," but oh well. It was alright... you let yourself flow, but your wording could use work. Read some of my work if you get the time.