Very original and unique! I love the lines
I see myself inside the domain,
My body floating and twisting
Being strewn about my unseen forces,
But the vision is still welcomed because,
That is what I feel, but do not express.
---very imaginative! 5/5

Love ღ Always,
Heather M Craig

That was very cool. I really like your poetry, keep writing.
~anne~

thats interesting with a capital I....but liked it a lot...<3! please check mine out!! im new.

Liz

This was great! I loved your language in this one. It just makes the whole poem seem to come alive... Great work!

~Ciao Lipton