Comments : The Awful Truth

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Looking everywhere, I see,
    Behind fixed eyes,
    A fake sense of reality,
    Filled with numerous lies.

    Loved that stanza! I know exactly how ya feel, but just stay strong... I hope for you the best! 5/5

    Love,
    Heather

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Great write hunnie. Powerful <3 I know what you mean really...This was an incredible write...totally true, you're such an amazing writer. I love you hun, sorry this comment sucks..<3 love ya, hope you're okay xxxxxx

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 19 years ago

    by Pat

    this is a good poem i like it you should read some of mine at poems about life authour pat