Comments : Fallacious Aspirations

  • 19 years ago

    by SplitSided

    I like that 1 it's better then any that i can write...nice 1 keep it touch

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Nice write, very thoughtful. Keep writing and keep smiling Heather.

    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

    Nidhi's Love - Amit.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    great pome, i love it! it has a good meaning, i know my dreams have changed receintly.

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ hugs & love~

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Another insightful masterpiece! You are such a gifted poet, well done! Oh and I loved the creativity you conveyed in "My Heart's Monologue"! Loved that one as well, but couldn't comment, so here it is~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by Pianist

    True lesson... I rarely say this, but I did like your wording. Most poets do NOT know how to word a poem. It's as if a mental veil covers their thoughts. Anyway, you impressed me. Read some of my work if you find the time.

  • 19 years ago

    by Solace

    Another great poem... 5/5 take care (always)) xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Very thought provoking, well done, Also on your love ones I wanted to say well done, I seem to get logged off everytime I try to comment on one, But I will keep trying, well done on all your poems.

  • 19 years ago

    by Trevor

    ur such an amazing writer, its astounding how many things you can write on. a definite 5
    trevor--