Comments : Even Though...(For Shaun)

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Excellent Write, Heather. But... Why?

    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

    Nidhi's Love - Amit.

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    That's pretty creative! ....

    Trouble in paradise? I hope all is well!! Very nice write!! I really like this one! 5/5 :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Nice job, Heather. Creative using the 5 senses. Hope everything is O.K. now. Love ya, hugs, *Ann*

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    pretty much sums it up heather.

    Five/Five

    Signed,
    Dark Savior

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Yes Heather, I too thought so! But how did it happen? Is it okay to talk here, or we should talk by email?

    p/s

    Thanks for your comments and votes too.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Sure, Heather. Tell me what happened to albert! I'll wait for your email.

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    ooh i like this very much...full of emotion, its wonderful and brilliantly stunning writing. i love it...5/5

    love always xx

  • 19 years ago

    by XxIntuitiveAdvicexX

    hey heather that is great i gave u a 5/5 exellent job

    xoxoxoxxox, Amber

  • 19 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Heather you are so sweet! You are always thinking of others and dedications like these shows you a lot! You are a wonderful poet with everything you write..And I do mean everything! Keep up the terrific work!
    Kind Regards,
    ~Chelsey~

  • 19 years ago

    by Bizarre

    HeHe that's pretty cool. good job. *5

  • 19 years ago

    by christina

    grt poem hunz:D
    full off emtions
    always smile
    peaceeeee love yaaaa

  • 19 years ago

    by Angie

    Lots of emotion and beautifully written. Great job once again. Keep it up. 5/5

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    aww heather....im sorry things didnt work out =(....im here if you wanna talk or anything...but im sure you have plenty of people to talk to lol...i like how you used the 5 senses as well, very creative....this is another brilliant piece of work =), keep it up...take care ~much love~ ~many hugs~

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

  • 19 years ago

    by Becky drake

    Heather
    You are absoutly the most creative writer, I think I've ever read. Your poem was wonderful.......I did get the 5 senses, and that was brillant.....Hope you both are Ok, and I will keep you in my prayers. Thanks Love ya Becky

  • 19 years ago

    by Trevor

    totally beautiful, sad but its admitting your own faults which is so much harder than laying the blame on others. amazing work. you can write whatever style you want. loved it.
    trevor--