once again awesom job.....you are good. God has given you some powerful words to share with the world, and I'm so blessed to get to read your words. great job, Love ya Becky

hey!congrats!you've done a great job on that poem even though it's very long but's still it's so nice to read again and again.
A VERY TOUCHING LOVE STORY!!!
2 THUMBS UP!

it was amazing but predictable sorry

thats a GREAT poem! fook me that was deep i wish i could write like that but even in writing i suppose u have to feel what u write

god, i wish i can write that good....but i can't so too bad for me....but anyways, that was AWESOME!!! keep up your strong talent, and never change...

a great poem. i gosh so touched by it.
really well created(great poems are nt written).
5 of 5 frm me keep up good work , i will b waiting for more

a great poem. i gosh so touched by it.
really well created(great poems are nt written).
5 of 5 frm me keep up good work , i will b waiting for more

hey ur poem was awesome n rele rele touchin i must congratulate you.One day ir you already havent a poet will notice your work and you will be a great poet writer

take care n keep on writing sarah x x x x x x x x x

All I have to say is that was one of the best poems I have ever read! It was touching and, frankly, it met with me on a personal level because I too like a guy that much and he too doesn't pay that much attention to me either. I'm just not planning on commiting suicide over it...anyways, I just wanted to say that was awesome and keep writing.

oh yeah, please go to the guestbook on my website and send in a couple poems for my Quotes and Notes section. That would be cool. The site is

www.freewebs.com/mentalrocker_13

this poem is exellent. it made me think of a relationship i was once in.

this poem is exellent. it made me think of a relationship i was once in.

this is a really good poem hunn!!! I like it a lot... I think I might just put it on my journal...good job hunn 5/5

Good job, two thumbs up for you. I read it twice and I want to read it again and again and again then I share this poem to my friend.

very good,and very sad

one word for it "WOW" keep up the good work

I Loved it...it was really long but it was wonderful...i really liked...
Good Job! ! :)

It was EXCELLENT i loved it..Wonderful Job! ! !

great poem! i just loved it, its very touching! hope to read some more of your poems if theyre all as good as this one (no doubt about it, your blessed!)

and as comment on this: Amy Roullier ( P C ) at 2005-05-04

THis is a really really good poem. very nice job 5/5. Though I hope you realisse that when u comit sucide u will not go to heaven.,,,i notices that u said that you wrote about the girl being in heavan with god, but when you comit sucide its one sin that cant be forgiven, casue for one how can u ask for forgiveness if ur dead...But I really did like the poem, its sad byt well written

*how do you know so sure that you wont go to heaven?* nonsense!!!

loves

that was awesome. so true. was this a real life expeirience? i'm sure it was. thanx for the great reading. one of the best i've ever read. love liz and cheychey

Amit that was beautiful but so sad! You're the love poem King! Another amazing piece of work. Your poems are always so very well written. Keep it up I always look forward to reading your poems. I have finally posted a new ones if you want to read it! Take Care~ Brooke