My box

by Amanda   Apr 29, 2005


I am trapped,
inside a box,
closed so tightly,
without locks,

I can't get out,
I have tried,
there was a time,
I would have cried,

I just lay still,
without a care,
I'm in here,
is this fair?

If i scream,
and i shout,
will you come,
to let me out,

Someone heard,
my scream and shout,
then they came,
to let me out,

Now I am free,
of this box,
closed so tightly,
without locks.

Copyright 2005 - Amanda Linzi

I know this is rubbish and it probably won't be understood so let me explain it. What i mean by in a box with no locks - like i'm trapped in this box but it isn't locked and i havent quite learnt how to open it and get free yet. I wrote it in August 2003 so it isn't one of my best. Please comment anyway Thanks :)

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  • 19 years ago

    by newlun

    i have felt the same way you really know how to capture it in writing

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Its not rubbish, I thought it was really good well done :D

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy B

    Might be old, might be rubbish for you, but for those with a clear vission, it's very good. nice work.
    Tim

  • 19 years ago

    by AJ

    Really good. It wasn't rubbish. 5/5 Can't wait to read more.

    -no more

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Why did you resubmit it??? Oh my God I have a fu**ed up day....I really hate my life!!! Hope that you are feeling better than me???

    Love Sabrina