by Timothy Bledsoe Apr 29, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Here is where I stand |
Hm, this was a great poem. She must be crazy though, i mean to go for a guy so oblivious of her true self. Plus, she could have you..therefor probably make her life ten times better to know you would care for her. Hope all works well for you, as well as her. Nice job! |
by Brookeღ
You write so beautifully! I really enjoy your work! I will have to check out your poems more often! ~Brooke~ |
by Brookeღ
That's so sweet and sad! You have to go after what you want in life if you don't try you will never know what could have been. You showed great emotion! Very well done! Take Care! Brooke~ |
by ~*Ley*~
ooo i love love love the ending teamy, its so clever and sad and powerful. keep up the good work |
by AJ
Good job. It has a nice flow. I liked it. |