Good poem, you seem to be going from strength to strength, very depressing though, I really hope things will get better for you

Well done! Excellent Write!

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.

great poem, i wil come back to read your other new one soon, i'm in a hurry to be some where, take care!

~PLP~ lil slam~

Wow you have some beautiful description in there, very well done, thanx for your comment, means alot, keep it up xxx