At first, I thought you were being born.
Then I thought you are being reborn
not knowing your past life but aware
of your self. But I do believe it is a
out of body near death experience.
I had one of those back in the 70s in a
roll over car accident. Excellent Logan,
thought provoking read indeed, Write On.

hey baby...Glad to see some writes from you :D I miss you hun <33 I love you soo much <3<3

I'm not really sure I get the poem...I'm kind of dense though..,It's really well written though, it flowed well, and it kinda worried me though, with what I think it means...I hope you're okay though, physically and mentally... <3 I love you soo much, I can't wait to talk to you again xxxxx <3

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Very good! A little unclear in the middle, and I would say you dont really manage to write down whats on your mind. I guess its just me:)

This is an excellent poem. Keep writing.