Well done, Logan. Excellent Write, very nicely written.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.

Omg..I hope your train didn't really crash hun..I'm so out of it lately, I'm not sure if that's what you even meant...I love the write though..and I'm soooo glad you're alive...I love you so much <3 You're everything to me hun...I hope you're okay...we need to talk soon <3 I love you xxxxxx <3

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

This reminds me of those typical action films. The hero is stuck in a train tunnel, and he always finds a way out. The person in this poem didn't though. Well described, good pictures, nice poem!

Wicked poem. This has great descriptions and one of my favorites from you.