by erotema Apr 29, 2005
category :
Life, society /
about society
*an elegy on modernity in vers libre* |
by ** JeNa **
omg that was another great poem, ur an amazing writer i hope to read more of ur work soon, please rate and comment my latest "something much more" |
by ASPHYXIATED
this poem was really good...tanx 4 your comments..5/5 *mwah* |
by Emilia
very good...!! 5/5 fot this one... Please check out my poem "Me Vs. The Razor Blade it would mean a lot.. hugs /september |
by Fireflower
wow.. this is very advanced writing! it sound alot like something shakespere would write, that makes it awesome! you're like, such an awesome writer! keep up the awesome work! |
by Robert
This reads like something in an old Beat nick cafe where people read poems and snapthier fingers. Not saying it is bad but it has that flavor to it. I liked for the most part the style was unique and the message was surpisingly very clear good job... |