Good poem, wow, another master piece from you, keep it up I am really enjoying looking at all your poetry, well done :D xxxx

Wow...very good, i like it when you tell stories in your poems, the questions make it very powerful as well! Stay strong
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Oh, this is by far, my favorite, I have never read a poem like this before so major props to your creativity! The first stanza lured me in greatly. Great job, Jacklyn! And for some odd reason, I have to point out, my gov't class is doing a mock trial in a lil over a week and I'm playing a lawyer (although for the defense) but i really got into the spirit of this. 5/5

Love Always,
Heather M Craig.

Wow this is unlike any other poem i've read before. It almost placed guilt upon me by just reading it.

You created an atmosphere within the poem - on of anger and helplessness. I enjoyed reading it!

Luff,
||Kalah.

WOW... Great poem, I'll have to say this is my new favorite out of your hundred some poems!!!
5/5,
Hugs & Love
~Roni~

awwwwww....that was REALLY sad...but I loved it..it was awesome. Keep up the good work

Wow! This was terrific. Very well written and perfectly expressed. 5/5:)

WO. That one BLEW ME AWAAAAAAAAAY!!!! *WHOOSH* So sad, so beautifully written. Shows that your biggest mistakes can permanently damage some1 else...like the attorney kept saying what you do can't make this boy happy again.....5/5. Thank u for the comment! I always enjoy hearing from you. You are a gr8 friend too! LUV YA ~LIL SLAM~, STAY TITE PEACE!!! //ARI\\

not bad the questions were a bit confusing just kinda rolled into one another after a while, but its not bad at all. I love the message, my friend was raped and so i feel a connection with this poem
~*Freak*~ thx for the comment btw

great poem.. i really like it well done.. and keep it up mwaZ Stephy!! :):)

Hot stuff. So sad, but it is so vivid, like being there. I really enjoyed this piece.

Regards,

Steve

That was an awesome poem. you have told a stroy i'm sure many of us wish we could explain.
take care...and i was wondering how you came to write this poem?? it's original
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This was a great poem. It had a catchy story and it was just really good. :)

Great poen sad but good

Yup.