Nice One, Miss Vicious. Heartfelt and Touching, very well written.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.

A very good if sadly beautiful poem 5++++

Very sad poem, but ver nice

Beautiful and sad at the same time! Very well done September! Take Care! Brooke 5/5

i feel the exact same way
5/5
excellent use of words

A touching and beautiful poem. Well written, great job, keep it up. 5/5

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

another awesome poem.. i can totaly relate to that one too.. keep it up!

awww great poem flows well! thanks soo much for commenting on my poem! x

Very sad. I love you work! 5/5. Great job and keep it up!

savannah

I liked the idea of the poem, it was simple but touching. i don't really know what to say, but I definitly enjoyed it. the part that goes something like "I want to have butterflies again" or something is totally great, i can so relate to it!! Keep writing, and btw thank you so much for your comments.
Satuxxa

I liked this poem. Very expressive. Although, should "You made me lost a special friend" be "You made me lose a special friend"? I liked the sentence fluency and form of this poem. 4/5.

hey... it was really good....and well writen you have a talent...keep writing
//.:amanda:.\\

good poem. maybe you could elaborate on the imagery of the butterfly in the poem, to make it better i mean. thanks for the comment. good write and good luck with your writing.

-ellie

Good poem ^.^

Keep on writing and allways believe
<3Erin

Good poem ^.^

Keep on writing and allways believe
<3Erin

Great poem. It flowed well. I like it. Thanks for the comment. 5/5

~no more

thanks for commenting on my poem "in black" and i read some of urs and wow,, ur very talented.. keep up the good work and i look forward to some new ones. i added u to favorites.
much love
kristy

5/5 wow! awesome poem! keep it up! cant wait to read more of your work!
fanx for you comment!
xoxoxoxo

That was Frickin awsome!!!!! but awsomely sad (dont ask what i mean by that because i have absolutly no idea) well keep up the good work 5/5 Heather08

That was Frickin awsome!!!!! but awsomely sad (dont ask what i mean by that because i have absolutly no idea) well keep up the good work 5/5 Heather08