wow this is such a great poem my dad is like just the same way!!!!!! i know just how you feel. but yeah you should let ur dad see it if you neva yet!!!!!!

that poem is AWEOSME!!!! i, i can't really think of anything else to type-it left me speechless it was so good...but i guess i can say never change...you got talent there, man...

This is a great poem!! Sad...but really well-written! 5/5

Plz vote and comment on mine toO!

Wow that was great i know what you mean in a way cuz in my moms eyes i dont do anything the right way and she dont like the people i choose to hang with but i cant say that bout my dad cuz when i was 8 years old he told me and my sis that he didnt want to see us but eventually he started but now hes locked up well hope you can check out my work

Its sad either of your parents should make you feel like this hun. Don't be sorry for being who you are, as long as your trying your best you haven't let anyone down. At the end of the day you only have to answer to yourself and God. I hope things do get better for you, have you shown your Dad this poem ,or explained to him how it makes you feel? Maybe you should babes, if he doesn't know there is a problem he can't make a change. Anyways I hope it all works out for you...

I give it five. I enjoyed it very well done.

Wow!... all i can say is that, if he doesn't think you're good enough, then maybe he can't see the real you! everybody's worth something, don't let him get you down... stay strong and take care! 5/5