Wow...thanks..I just write down the way I feel....and I am happy to know someone likes them.... I'll add you too....if you have msn messenger my email is girard_sweetheart_88@hotmail.com....add me :)

The thought of being alone
Makes me want to die
If I didn’t have anyone
I would do nothing but cry

Should be "The tought of being alone,makes HER want to die, if SHE didnt have anyone, SHE would do nothing but cry"

Because you changed from me to her then at the end its secretly you..
And also "And screams in my sleep " should be HER sleep..It would make it all flow better and be easyer to understand :D good poem I liked the end and the flow wasnt bad well done xxx

Great job
i lvoe it
its greatful awesome
5/5