Nicely written, very well done.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.

Great Job! this is both sad and um..... how can i put it... romantic. its sad that the person in your poem doesnt like them self and that they feel invisable. but their love make them stick together and pulkl through a problem. (Doesnt make sense, lol)
5/5 nicely written.

thanks :) its some thing that means alot to mo thanks 4 the votes