Oh wow, Logan, this sent shivers down my spine, this is fantastic. I love it, it's gripping and it doesn't seem too forced...
Love ya,

xoxZoexox

aww wow...awesome...this was..so deep <3 I love it...reminds me of this song, like the story plot...It's lovely...brilliantly written, this one and your "So High" one are up on my top favs. =) Lovely work hun...I hope you're okay...I love you so much <33 xxxx I hope we talk soon xxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

be strong hun, i know you can be <3 I'm here for you, forever xxx

I cant say anything about this, because I'll only begin to cry! Which really shows how deadly tired I am. Exellent, this one was closer up to my feelings than any other poem I've read. which probably sounds really weird. I think I better go to sleep now.

How is it you can write all these great poems? Makes me upset with my own suck talents. This had a great dark flow and brilliant word choice.