by Sean Allen Apr 29, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
They say everyone has |
by sibyllene
I like how it was sort of a stream-of-consciousness deal. it sounds like someone talking naturally and openly. it makes for a different style. |
by Natalie
This was pretty good. But, All the stanza's look different from each other? I don't know if you three did that on purpose or not though. |
by Amanda
Awesome job. I loved the way you set the peom out and it had a great structure to it. I thought it was full of emotion and the reader can feel the poem which makes it extra good to read. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece of work :) |
by Megann Lee
I like the thought of this poem. I've tried writting poems with my friends, they didn't turn out as good as this, not even close. So thumbs up to you. I enjoyed reading it though it was slightly long, none the less I liked it. |
by Darien
A very nice collaboration. It was really hard to tell where you guys split off. The flow of this poem was great, and it seemed like one writer. You guys did good, and I liked the topic of lonliness. It was ironic to read that friends wrote a poem on lonliness. Lol, good job to the 3 of you. |