gr8 poem.. i jus dunno if u meant it 2 rhyme or not.. but very heartfelt.. i din get it at first, but then i reli did.. very gud.. as Friends~ here sed.. gr8 sentiments.. gud goin!!
keep it up.. thumbs up from me!
nouna

Wow, This poem had a lot of emotion in it. I liked it. Im not sure I liked the scheme tho. It was good hto. Keep up the great work!
Love Always
Allison

To me it sounded like you had a bunch of thoughts about stuff and this is what came out of it. It was preety good cause alot of people tend to put down rambling jumbles if they just write thoughts.

I wasn't a huge fan of the first stanza. The flow didn't seem to work. Other than that the other stanzas were great and i love the lennon quote!!!

Nice poem! I love the style, the diction and the flow, I just personally disagree with the concept that we're all alone. But that doesn't matter, what matters is that this poem is really good! =)

I would've never guessed that this was written by more than one person. That always makes for a wonderful collaboration to not be able to tell where the other picks up.
The first stanza is so relatable especially to me. I've felt all that you convey many times.
It amazes me the way the Lennon quote really sums up this poem.
No real critique from me, it's beautifully written as is.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

This was great! The fourth stanza really brings it all together.My favorite is the third stanza, though, especially, "Blind leading blind in the sunshine." I don't like the idea of having a quote in a poem, though, I personally think poems are for your own words, even if another's are better-suited. All in all, it was pretty good!

A very nice collaboration. It was really hard to tell where you guys split off. The flow of this poem was great, and it seemed like one writer. You guys did good, and I liked the topic of lonliness. It was ironic to read that friends wrote a poem on lonliness. Lol, good job to the 3 of you.

I like the thought of this poem. I've tried writting poems with my friends, they didn't turn out as good as this, not even close. So thumbs up to you. I enjoyed reading it though it was slightly long, none the less I liked it.

Awesome job. I loved the way you set the peom out and it had a great structure to it. I thought it was full of emotion and the reader can feel the poem which makes it extra good to read. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece of work :)

This was pretty good. But, All the stanza's look different from each other? I don't know if you three did that on purpose or not though.

I really liked this part though..

"which we gave each other.
How can we leave our past behind?
We've grown so much
and we've done it together.
How can we part ways?"

I thought it was good! 5/5 =)

`Taleee. xx.

I like how it was sort of a stream-of-consciousness deal. it sounds like someone talking naturally and openly. it makes for a different style.