Invisible

by ¤|Æ’lοяεηζîά|¤   Apr 29, 2005


I stand in the group
of my friends,
they laugh, they joke,
I'm invisible.

I sit in the classroom,
life goes on,
they talk, they gossip,
I'm invisible.

I go out for recess,
friends with me,
I talk, they hear,
I'm invisible.

I stay in my room
it's only me,
I breathe, I cry,
I'm visible.

[ this is a free verse poem. some may think it doesn't make sense. but, poems are like that.pls vote and comment, or critisize if u want.]

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashli

    it does make sense...nice job! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Oh I'm a dork!! I meant SAD! Sorry!

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    WELCOME TO THE CLUB!!!!! :0)

    I like this. Though it's a bit side you put it all very nicely. I love how you put us in different situations.

    Nice write!! :) I'll be seeing you around....

  • 19 years ago

    by black days

    so very true. i like your peoms its great. =)

  • 19 years ago

    by Robin

    I can really relate, and I totally got it!! Loved it, amazing!! 5/5 from me : D
    XoxoX
    Robin

Read All Comments (9)

More Poems By ¤|ƒlοяεηζîά|¤