Powerful

this poem is so great and i totally get it!!! thx 4 commenting on my poem and omg thats why hailie's account got deleted?!?!? im soo sad!!! neway ur such a great poet. tell me if u make nemore poems!!!

wow i wrote a poem just like this one. and i think i called it invisible too lol. great write tho..5/5

*jenny*

Hi. I really enjoyed this poem. It was a very good outlook on a commonly felt sense of seclusion. The use of terminal emphasis really exemplifies the blatant yet unseen internal struggle that youths often go through. Well done.

I can really relate, and I totally got it!! Loved it, amazing!! 5/5 from me : D
XoxoX
Robin

so very true. i like your peoms its great. =)

WELCOME TO THE CLUB!!!!! :0)

I like this. Though it's a bit side you put it all very nicely. I love how you put us in different situations.

Nice write!! :) I'll be seeing you around....

Oh I'm a dork!! I meant SAD! Sorry!

it does make sense...nice job! 5/5