Comments : Darks Come to Save Me (Acrostic)

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Look the letter from each sentence, they make up a phrase. hope you enjoyed..put a lot of effort into it.

    It is how i feel at the moment. that there is a part of me which i have labeled dark that always seems to come and aid me in times of need...he is like my best friend and i really have no way of saying thank you...

    honestly i know that sounds completely insane...but it is how i feel. I hope you understand.

    Thank you for reading this comment on my poem, thank you also for reading or voting or commenting or all of the above. It really means a lot to me..right now it truely does...

    Signed,
    Dark Savior

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Probably your best yet. And the poem's called an Acrostic ... anyhow, dark's not your better half, the justice of your heart is. Best of luck to you!

    Love you,
    Heather
    ps 5

  • 19 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    Great poem... I love how the first letter form a phrase. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    DARKNESS OWNS MY SOUL!

    Great Write! Talented!

    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

    Nidhi's Love, Amit.

  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    *claps*....nice work shaun, i really like it...keep it up =)....take care ~much love~

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    DARKNESS OWNS MY SOUL - Brilliance. All that effort payed off...and yes, I enjoyed. :)

    xxx