awesome but also sick i think but 5/5 good job hope its not true

WOW!! Really really well-written and full of emotion! Sad...but good. 5/5

great poem! sad to find out that it was true, keep writing gurl. ur one of da best poem writers i no! :) 100%

freakin excellent. wow, that is a really awsome poem. i hope you are ok? that was very powerful. i can really feel it. awsome work. keep it up. Much Love

Nick

omg, Im soo sorry that this happened to you. And hope things get better soon!

im sorry... good poem, i hope things get betta for you...

Ohhh ! thats too sad : (
but you are strong though,hope you
keep on being strong !

the title is soo touching too,
you have your own style though.

: )

Peace
Rua Francis.

oh and by the way, i like the reapeted part ,its the best : )