Damn, Aidyn. This was really good! Sent shivers up my spine, seriously! Great job, keep it up.
Lots of love,
~Krystle~ XXXX

thats an awsome poem, good job!

Wow!!! This is Amazing! It's ur best poem yet! I love it, like Krystal said, it sends chills through me. Great Job, keep up the good work

That was great. I loved the word choice just riveting I suppose. That was awesome. I really, really like this one. The flow and the word choice was amazing.
~Disturbed Unknown

*comes out of hiding* i closed my eyes and scrolled down through your endless list of poems, stopping my mouse at random on one i could comment on...and what luck to have found another of your series poems! =) these are always impressive. i don't know how old this one is, but it's certainly high quality, MPB.
i don't want to give you another stale 'ooh, me like' comment, though, so i should look for something to suggest. the thing is, it's difficult with your poems seeing as how they need no retouching as far as i'm concerned. if you like, you could change the expression "thrown" to "strewn" for a little articulate edge (this was in your semi-last stanza, btw) ..other than that, it's positively scintillating as is