I'm so sorry about what had happened to you but so fortunate he's been locked away. Stay strong 5/5 |
I feel so bad that you went through this. But am so glad hes put away. You are a GREAT writter..5/5. |
by Amit
Nicely written, very well done. |
by JaeC
Im sorry you had to deal with that I had a very similar life to that I hope life shapes up for you |
by PinkLaces
Well Done For Being So Brave And Telling Your Mother, And Speaking Up About It. |
by Chasity
UR A STRONG PERSON AND I BOW DOWN TO U!! |
by DarkxBlood
o god...I've read so many poems on this site that filled me with deep deep sadness, but never have i read one that actually made me cry. i didnt think i had any tears left from all the countless hours crying my eyes out from my disgusting life...which is nothing like yours...but when i read this one-my first tear in a long time rolled down my cheek. its just not FAIR. its like people like us are chosen to carry everyone elses pain...idk. i guess im used to it how bout u? anyways...Luvyalotz |
by meg
That poem was so sad, it brought tears to my eyes. I know how you feel (I won't go into detail about it sorta a long story). Some people are just total jerks, I'm pretty sure you and I both know that. I guess it's just a test.. like everything else. Stay strong, and if you ever need to talk just email me or something.. and i'll be there.. I promise. |
by foreverhappy
this is so sad. I've been there. My dad beat and raped me from the time i was 5 till i was 13. He was in jail and in April hung himself and honestly it was the best day of my life. This is a really good poem. Your a great role model for other people just by finally standing up to your dad. |
by Summer
i just want to say that you're a great writer and that im sorry to hear about what your father did..but you took courage and got through it and even told your mom, most girls wouldn't have..i love all your poems,and i'm glad your dad got what he deserved because you're really talented.. |