this is very creative, i love it! great job, i thnk i understand it's meaning, least to me it meant something. wonderful write!!

~PLP~ lil slam~ hugs

Very good poem once again, intelligient use of language, Very enjoyable well done..

this makes perfect sense to me. i dont know if this is how it was to u but it seems like u want to be depressed and that the happiness that is creeping up on u is tormenting u because u know it wont stay. i dunno thats just how i see it. its a really deep poem...thanks for commenting on mine

-Renee