by AntiSocial16
wow! this actually brought a small sting of tears to my eyes cuz i started thinking bout my bf and how much he means to me. your an amazing writer. keep it up! and stay safe, strong, and healthy! |
by BlueDreams
nice write amit....what a beautiful poem!....perfectly written! 5/5 |
by Serenia
wow that was a really great poem. i love how you write your poems. keep up the good work. 5/5 thanx for commenting on mine ;) |
by Ann Stareyes
Beautiful Amit, what else is left to say. hugs, love, *Ann* |
aww..this is really sad. reminds me of a different poem called something like "if tomorrow never comes" or something like that...they both make me cry:(!! they're sad, but yet happy. anyway, excellent job!! keep it up~ |
by Nobia
wonderful write...very touching...ure getting better and better!!!keep it up! 5 for sure!!! see ya take care... |
by Dark Savior
Very well done, i liked the way you presented it, showed how things made you closer. What you liked about love and so forth (the flights) |
Aww that was such a sweet poem! loved it 5.0 |
Wow that was sooo beautiful but so simple in a sense, you took a basic scenario and turned it into one of the best, most moving and most beautiful poem i've read in ages! |
by Angie
Amit, this was absolutly beautiful *wiping tears* and so very well written. All your poems are straight from the heart. Thats only one of the things I love about you and your work. Once again its another masterpiece for you. 5/5 |
It's such a sweet poem. Keep up the writing. |
Hey this is an awesome poem!! you have so much talent!! thanks for commenting on my poem!! its means a lot to me!! awesome job *5 |
Wow! That was a beautiful Amit! Even though I'm only 12, that poem in a way made me think of the person I love. It really means a lot that you commented. He really does mean the world to me, but some people just don't understand that. I can really tell you love Nidhi. I wish you both happiness. Beautiful write Amit! (",) |
by Kristen
i love this poem, its a great concept and beautifully written..gave me the chills even..great job :) |
Aww, one of your best yet! =) Great job! |
Beautiful as always Amit, it brought tears to my eyes!!! You are such an amazing writer and your poems are so straight from your heart, I can really feel that when I read your poems!!! |
by Lauren Lee
beautiful! good job 5/5 |
by katie!
Another wonderful poem amit, really beautiful once again, keep on writing and thank you for all the comments, :) xxx |
by Amanda Bee
I just LOVED it. It was so heartfelt and sweet!!! Great job Amit. 5/5:) |
by Gem
Positively Marbolous! Lmao. Seriously though. That is a brill poem. I feel happy that i got a comment of someone of your talent! Thankyou very much. Luv Gem xx |