by Mj Apr 30, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
The whipped cream sky i see above me |
by kiesha
That was a very beautiful poem. I really like it and can identify with it. I paint too. I love how you wrote "the whipped cream sky" I thought it was really interesting, I never heard it described in that way before. Keep writing and take care. |
by nikki
another great poem i luv it keep up the good work. |
by Amit
Nicely written, very well done. |