Nicely written, very well done.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.

another great poem i luv it keep up the good work.

That was a very beautiful poem. I really like it and can identify with it. I paint too. I love how you wrote "the whipped cream sky" I thought it was really interesting, I never heard it described in that way before. Keep writing and take care.
><> Kiesha