by Robert Apr 30, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
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This is a great poem. I like it a lot. Great flow, great overall everything. I gave it a 5. |
by Brookeღ
I hope this isn't true but if it is I am very sorry! That's very sad. I see you do need some help with the spelling but you have a great poem here! Take Care! Brooke~ |
again i loved it and duno what to say |
by BlueDreams
very interesting! great poem once again....yet very expressed written, 5/5. take care. |
by ~*Ley*~
i would have given it a 5, but the spelling mistakes really put me off. you have to work on those because with them there, they disconnect the entire thing i had to read a few lines more than TWICE to make sense of it. other than that its very good and very sad. i hope its not true. |