Nicely written, very well done.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.

aww:( is that who you were talking about in your comment on my poem? well great write, hope to see more from you keep it up!
and thanks for your comment it meant alot!
xxxChristinaxxx

aww how sad...reminds me of that saying "you never know what you have til it's gone" anyways great poem hope to see more! and thank you so much for your comments on mine they really meant alot!:)
xxxChristinaxxx

hey everyone thanks for commenting and voting. this is my first poem putting up here so excuse meeh iph it aint that good lol. keep up the comments!