Comments : Waiting

  • 19 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    Hey, this poem says a lot about how I feel as well. Great job 5/5

    ~ Tina

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    you got some really great lines in there ell, great write. keep finding the smile, its there somewhere hun

    lu -x-x-x-

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Brilliant message through this poem. Especially the first stanza:

    Look into my eyes,
    See the tears threatening to pour,
    Look deep into my tears,
    Tell me what you’re looking for,

    That has to be one of the most perfect verses!! :-)

    I so wish i could give you a real hug but this is all i can do for now..*hugs* and sendin all my love xxxxx