by -Erin- Apr 30, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You stand in the corner by the door,hands in your pockets staring at the floor. |
by Carmen
that was great. whatd he do though? |
You got some talent! i gotta hand it to ya! this poem is awesome I loved it!! 5/5!! |
by Shy
Nice 4/5 |
by Nici
An unusual layout to this poem, but that just added to its value. There was still a flow, by the use of description. |
by Dorotea©
Hmmm |