what a clever topic to write it on. everything flowed and no rhyming was forced it was brilliant so i gave you a 5 which is what everyone should give you for that

That was wonderfully sad! that ppl can put other ppl down like that. your a wonderful writer and should definately keep this up! if u could comment on me that would be wonderful
andi

This was so sad...almost made me cry. i dont see how people treat other people like that, its honestly stupid...there is not point in doing stuff like that because its not going to make u feel good. i wish people would stop and realize how bad that can get to some people