Me and the other day

by Amanda   Apr 30, 2005


I feel I want to end it all,
trying to get it off my mind,
knowing you will talk me out,
you are sweet and kind,

I'm just feeling the rejection,
my heart is feeling sore,
I just feel hurt and angry,
can't take this anymore,

I love you and want to forgive,
I cannot seem to do it yet,
I'm scared it will happen again,
what you did I can't forget,

If I did something to deserve it,
if I spoke to make you mad,
I'd understand why you would,
want to make me feel so sad,

I want to hug and make it up,
I'd do everything that it takes,
just want to sleep forever,
and i won't make any mistakes,

thought you would make me safe,
and help me grow some more,
don't know what's happening to us,
now i'm just feeling insecure.

Copyright 2005 - Amanda Linzi

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  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    this seemed to not flow as well as your others I would have used different words in some parts but it was a good read just need abit of spit shine revision maybe next time. Take Care...

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Okay, what's happening with MSN??? I can't log on!!! I had the same problem last night, when I tried to log on....So sorry if you thought I wouldn't talk to you....

    Hugs Sabrina

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Hey sweet Amanda!!! My boyfriend just told me that you were on msn yesterday AND HE TELLS ME NOW!!! Hmm, I don't think that he'll do that again =0) ha ha he wouldn't dare....Well I hope that we can talk soon, cause I really wanna know if you are ok??? Is that girl still bullying you???

    Love always Sabrina

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Sweet Amanda, please don't feel like this, please don't be sad!!! this poem expressed so many feelings and emotions and I feel your pain!!! I hope that you are ok??? You know I'm here for you...

    *Love sabrina*

  • 19 years ago

    by newlun

    your really good keep writing

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